Curious are the ways of this chaotic life,
makes me want to be a child again,
but when I was a child,
I wanted to grow up fast!
Myriad are the ways of this confusing life,
makes me think that boys have everything easy for them,
but I have heard them talk,
and they feel the opposite!
Weird are the ways of this abstract life,
makes me think I wanna go back to college,
but when I was there,
all I ever wanted was to start working!
Hazy are the ways of this clueless life,
makes me think I'm done with shopping,
but when I'm there,
I wanna buy everything in sight!
Crazy are the ways of this fast paced life,
makes me feel I am just a kid,
but when I'm sensible,
I realize I'm not one anymore!
Imperfect are the ways of this pretentious life,
makes me think all I want is freedom,
but what I don't realize is,
I'm scared to break free!
Jumbled are the ways of this scrambled life,
makes me walk in a maze,
day in and day out,
All I wanna say is,
Bravo me!
How True!! I can identify myself with your poem :)
ReplyDeleteWow !! you narrated story of lot many lives,including mine !! great job..what we want from life is really never clear and yes everybdy is confused..nice poem !!
ReplyDeleteThis is very true! We are never happy living in the moment, always looking backward or forward.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week!
Gerardine
Well written.
ReplyDeleteDescribes my life a little!
Never decisive at all!
Nice.
Nice insight. Nice poem :-)
ReplyDeleteSoo true!!
ReplyDelete@Ashes- I think everyone has been through all this sometime or the other
ReplyDelete@Bullseye & D2-Thnx:)
@Gerardine- Thnk you:), Thnx for visiting my blog again
@Sheela- I think its really true for the both of us:)
True. Well connected! :-)
ReplyDeleteagree.
ReplyDeletefabulous poem!
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ReplyDeleteplease visit Brian to wish his 14th marriage annivesary.
Thanks a lot!
insightful :)
ReplyDelete@Witty Jester- Thnx:)
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem,
ReplyDeleteyes, we always desire something we could not have or miss the past...
thank you for the contribution!
please let me know after you are done 18 poets visiting!
i can totally relate...life is really weird sometimes:)nicely done:)
ReplyDelete@Jingle and Hoiden- Thanks:)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem..smooth flow
ReplyDeleteRead A Woman's Life
Nice One
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