Blackmail

anatreek 6:43 AM 6 comments
I tell you,
Live my life,
Live like me,
Who are you?
I don't care,
Do as I say,
That's why you are here,
I won't listen,
I won't understand,
I want what I want,
and I want from you,
I can't keep myself happy,
I want you to make me,
Do what I say
or Watch me die

6 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 18, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    awesome piece.

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 18, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    Greetings, how are you?
    Your absence is missed, hope you well…
    Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!

    Hope to see you in,

    Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.

    Cheers.
    xoxox

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  3. Dr. Pratibha SinghFebruary 28, 2011 at 2:24 AM

    very touching poem.liked it!

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  4. anatreekFebruary 28, 2011 at 5:31 AM

    @Pratibha- Thnx :)

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  5. RamblerMarch 6, 2011 at 8:11 AM

    the key is "I want what I want, and I want it from you"..

    may be the ending would have been
    Do what I say...unless I will make you die :)

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  6. anatreekMarch 7, 2011 at 3:44 AM

    @Rambler- Hmmm..

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